Friday, January 6, 2012

Is this a good introduction to my Huck Finn essay?

Very well written and really like the ogy. Here are some suggestions. "within THE United States politics." add "the". I would also slightly rephrase the sentence that begins, "Jared Lee Loughner, a college student...." shorter sentences will provide more punch and meaning. Twain was amused twice, try using another word the second time around. Great intro.

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